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Evening in Tuscany

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Canon FD 35-105mm f3.5 w/speedbooster on GH5
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Hey there! Thank you for submitting to :iconphotographyguide: for feedback!
What a wonderful view you have captured! And with a vintage lens too! It's something I enjoy working with as well! Since you submitted for feedback, I do have a few suggestions for you:
- First off, I find that the landscape is a wee bit dark, a bit too dark to make out details of the village below. What I would suggest in this case is to locally adjust the exposure or shadows on the lower half of the photo. If you give that part a bit more light, the photo will be showing all its details and more interesting to look at, since it will hold keep us in more. It will also create a bit of a balance between the lightness of the sky and the ground.
- Second, I would cut off a fraction of the blue sky, just a wee bit above where it changes colour. Blue is a colour that wants attention, and by cutting away a bit of it, you will lead us into the photo much easier. 
Those skies with the mountains must be a sight for sore eyes! I bet you enjoyed that view while you were out there! Keep up the good work!
I hope this helps, and if you have questions, feel free to ask!